Nathan's Unfortunate Morning

[Brian]

One or two totally unexpected plot twists in part 3 and a terrific description of what finally happens to Nathan.

It's the type of story which lets our imaginations run riot over what might happen next, isn't it? I wonder if that sympathetic train manager might have been able to leave his duties in the care of a colleague later on and get off that train with Nathan to help him. All in the name of customer service, of course. Maybe the beautiful guy back at the station could have been persuaded to get over there too and help out. Nathan could use the support assuming he's able to overcome the embarrassment.

[pissbaby]

Such a hot story!

[briefs]

Brilliant story!

What a series of unfortunate events!

Do you know what colour boxers he was wearing?

[Wombat48]

Totally my kind of story ..loved it

[twj731]

Great story!!

[Mullat123]

Bravo!!

[ryan1990]

Just read al three parts - fantastic story!

[klads]

What a story! I really enjoyed that.